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Latest Flash Reviews
I'm not a fan of quiz games, but I'll set that aside to give a fair review.
Pros:
1.) Good idea knocking off the old "Who Wants to be a Millionaire?" concept. I think it worked out good.
2.) A good set of questions. Alot of people don't realize how aggravating it can be to come up with at least 15, going from easy to hard.
Cons:
1.) There was no sound. There wasn't even a sound for when you selected the correct/wrong answer. Add some FX in, and some music in the background. It helps keep people's attention.
Advice:
Really, the only thing I would suggest fixing would be the sound. Other than that, you did a good job.
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Haha...I saw this yesterday. It's a bit different though...did it not make it? Ah well, hope you have better luck this time.
Author's Response:
I'd realised i uploaded the wrong one, so i deleted it and resubmitted it again to get the full score deserved.
Thanks for the review.
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Good things:
1.) It was pretty funny. Anyone who's ever played a shooter game can relate to this.
Bad things:
1.) Speech makes movies alot more exciting. Without it, your submission is likely to get either a low score, or just blammed.
2.) Using stick figures is a bad thing. It gets even worse when they're poorly animated. Work on your artwork a bit.
Author's Response:
i'll take that in mind
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Latest Audio Reviews
Originality: Nothing in this song really stood out as far as originality goes, but it was catchy.
Diversity: Due to the lack of vocals, songs like this tend to get boring as they go along. I suggest to either vary the guitar parts a bit more, or add more instruments (This would include vocals) to make things a bit more interesting.
Clarity: The drums took dominance over the guitar parts in this song, which I'm not really a fan over. The guitar had a GREAT sound to it, but the quality was a bit poor.
Effort: Overall, this was a good song. Nothing outstanding, but it's worth a download.
Author's Response:
Thanx for the review man.This was the first song i ever recorded and yes, the song is a little boring by itself.You should check out the version under bad man incs name.He laid down some kik ass vocals on it for me.The song could still use some bass guitar in it,but other than that,Im am very pleased with it.Thanx again for the Download.
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Nice. Gotta love that lead synth. I've never heard the actual song, so it was pretty original to me. My only advice is to find a better way to end it. It kinda just stopped abruptly. Good job anyways.
Author's Response:
Strange!
It doesn't for me!
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Haha...everytime I check out the AP one of your songs seems to have just been submitted.
Originality: As I've said before, doing a remake deducts your originality score.
Diversity: You seem to have this bad habit of submitting songs that repeat too much. I think this should have ended about halfway through.
Clarity: It was ok. Nothing special.
Effort: Hard to tell. Once again, you doing a remake marks you down a bit.
Overall: Good song. I've noticed, however, that each of the three songs I've reviewed so far have lacked one thing: RESOLUTION! The song cuts out all of a sudden, and is really annoying. This should definitely be fixed.
Author's Response:
I have no time to check out everyone of my songs. This maybe sound harsh, but if you don't like the submissions I SENT, do BETTER yourself! Just FYI, I use best instruments I have!! Geez! *is pissed off*
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