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Originality: Nothing in this song really stood out as far as originality goes, but it was catchy.
Diversity: Due to the lack of vocals, songs like this tend to get boring as they go along. I suggest to either vary the guitar parts a bit more, or add more instruments (This would include vocals) to make things a bit more interesting.
Clarity: The drums took dominance over the guitar parts in this song, which I'm not really a fan over. The guitar had a GREAT sound to it, but the quality was a bit poor.
Effort: Overall, this was a good song. Nothing outstanding, but it's worth a download.
Author's Response:
Thanx for the review man.This was the first song i ever recorded and yes, the song is a little boring by itself.You should check out the version under bad man incs name.He laid down some kik ass vocals on it for me.The song could still use some bass guitar in it,but other than that,Im am very pleased with it.Thanx again for the Download.
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Nice. Gotta love that lead synth. I've never heard the actual song, so it was pretty original to me. My only advice is to find a better way to end it. It kinda just stopped abruptly. Good job anyways.
Author's Response:
Strange!
It doesn't for me!
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Haha...everytime I check out the AP one of your songs seems to have just been submitted.
Originality: As I've said before, doing a remake deducts your originality score.
Diversity: You seem to have this bad habit of submitting songs that repeat too much. I think this should have ended about halfway through.
Clarity: It was ok. Nothing special.
Effort: Hard to tell. Once again, you doing a remake marks you down a bit.
Overall: Good song. I've noticed, however, that each of the three songs I've reviewed so far have lacked one thing: RESOLUTION! The song cuts out all of a sudden, and is really annoying. This should definitely be fixed.
Author's Response:
I have no time to check out everyone of my songs. This maybe sound harsh, but if you don't like the submissions I SENT, do BETTER yourself! Just FYI, I use best instruments I have!! Geez! *is pissed off*
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I'm not going to write you a full review, seeing as I reviewed the original just moments ago. Everything was nice except for that wind instrument! It was horrible! I heard it and my natural reaction was "EWWWW!!". Fix that up, and you should have yourself a decent song.
Author's Response:
Yeah it needs fix, but just fyi, These instruments I use is the best ones I HAVE! If you don't like my work, please, do not review them!
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Originality: Of course, this IS a remake, so you don't get much for originality.
Diversity: Repeated too much for my taste.
Clarity: Sounded almost MIDI. I'm not saying it is, but it sounded like it...which marks you down for clarity.
Effort: The only reason you didn't recieve a 10 for effort was because you did a remake. If this were an original song, you would've certainly got full points.
Overall: Nice track. Keep 'em coming.
Author's Response:
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Originality: Sounded strange, though in a good way.
Diversity: Repeated a little too much. I got bored with it about halfway through.
Clarity: Not much to be said. Good job.
Effort: Considering it was done in 12 days, I don't think it was that bad at all.
Overall: Good, but there was something missing. I can't quite place my finger on what it was. Perhaps if you fixed up the beat to make it a little more danceable it would be better.
Author's Response:
thanks for review mate, Its an old song, though, of my casseste tapes.
soon ill be subbmitting brand new tunes, of my korg equipment, much better stuff.
anyway chears. dj dragon,.
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I love Dimmu Borgir, and this was a great cover of one of my favorite songs. Nice job! Just a suggestion, try a cover of Indoctrination. That would turn out nice. :D
Author's Response:
Hey man thanks a lot for the review. Hmm I think next I'm going to cover Kings of the Carnival Creation but I'll keep that tune in mind.
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Orig: I was going to give you a 6, cuz I've heard alot of these kind of pieces lately. However, it was slightly different (it had some synth in there) so I eased up a bit.
Div: It repeated a little too much. Nothing to really worry about though. Very nice peace.
Clar: It was a little too quiet. You had some cool stuff going on, but I couldn't hear it that well.
Eff: It sounds like you really tried hard to put these together. Nice job!
Overall: 8/10. You only had a few minor problems. Almost everything was great!
Author's Response:
yeah, right.....
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the quality was horrible, but everything else was fuckn awesome. it was like a trip back into those good old days when pantera ruled the world.
Author's Response:
Yeah.
The quality was horrible, because I dubbed everything onto tape with an 80s tape recorder back then, and the file limits on this website cut even more down the quality.
This was when I was too dumbfuck to discover that I can record on computers :)
Thanks for not judging the whole song badly because of the quality, I might remake this someday, along with one of my favourites 'Rivalry With Life'
Cheers NGSteve.
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no offense, but that song was just annoying. it didnt have any real structure to it...just a whole bunch of random sound effects.
Author's Response:
lol wow..... you have no idea what a dirty remix is then. dirty remix is basically a jumble of everything relating to or not to the thing being remixed. i understand that you're a bit confused, but hey, its what it is. no set key sig, structure, main theme, tempo, etc. thanks anyway!
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