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I'm not a fan of quiz games, but I'll set that aside to give a fair review.
Pros:
1.) Good idea knocking off the old "Who Wants to be a Millionaire?" concept. I think it worked out good.
2.) A good set of questions. Alot of people don't realize how aggravating it can be to come up with at least 15, going from easy to hard.
Cons:
1.) There was no sound. There wasn't even a sound for when you selected the correct/wrong answer. Add some FX in, and some music in the background. It helps keep people's attention.
Advice:
Really, the only thing I would suggest fixing would be the sound. Other than that, you did a good job.
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Haha...I saw this yesterday. It's a bit different though...did it not make it? Ah well, hope you have better luck this time.
Author's Response:
I'd realised i uploaded the wrong one, so i deleted it and resubmitted it again to get the full score deserved.
Thanks for the review.
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Good things:
1.) It was pretty funny. Anyone who's ever played a shooter game can relate to this.
Bad things:
1.) Speech makes movies alot more exciting. Without it, your submission is likely to get either a low score, or just blammed.
2.) Using stick figures is a bad thing. It gets even worse when they're poorly animated. Work on your artwork a bit.
Author's Response:
i'll take that in mind
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Good things:
1.) Nice drawing. Very neat and appealing.
2.) Different from other submissions I've seen recently. It's fun watching something that isn't usually done.
3.) Good sound. Speech was awesome, and that intro music was fitting.
Bad things:
1.) Move your characters around a little bit more. Change the scenery once a while (i.e. have your guy walk into the kitchen).
Author's Response:
Thanks for your great review, its given me some additional ideas, I just need to get better at flash to pull of making things move better. but I agree 100% thats what i will try in episode 2
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Graphics: I like the way you drew things, but the animation was HORRIBLE. It was slow, and choppy in some points. Get it running smoothly and it will be much better.
Style: Kinda lame...kudos on the uniqueness tho. Russian dairysmith...lol.
Sound: UHG! If there was one thing I could contribute to your low score, it would be this. The voices were HORRIBLE!!! Back away from the mic and speak a little louder to fix them up.
Violence: A Russian is almost killed with a knife, and some guy gets cheese dropped on him. Not that great in my book.
Interactivity: n/a
Humor: I think it was more stupid than funny. Sure, it had it's good parts...but it was still mostly stupid.
Overall: It has promise, but you have some major things you need to work on (sound, graphics) before you get it right.
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Graphics: Not that good. By the looks of it, they are drawn freehand...which results in very sloppy artwork.
Style: NO...MORE....MADNESS...TRIBUTES! We really have enough of these. Hell, my music even got used in one. Some advice, don't do Madness Tributes. They're almost as annoying as crappy stick movies.
Sound: Some music playing all the way through the movie in the background would have held my attention. It got boring after a while.
Violence: Hey, it's Madness! Violence galor! Improve your artwork and this would be ALOT better.
Interactivity + Humor: n/a
Overall: PLEASE stay away from Madness Tributes. They are a bad idea.
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Graphics: Awesome. I couldn't draw like that if I tried. XD
Style: This was so unique it's breaking the "Wtf?" barrier. It's still good though...I love it.
Sound: Great music. Somehow it fit the odd mood of the movie, which is great.
Violence: Creatures turned into some sort of food, and a ship getting eaten by a giant...thing. Not exactly great in my opinion, but seeing as violence wasn't the main idea of the movie it doesn't matter much.
Interactivity: n/a
Humor: I'm assuming this wasn't meant to be funny.
Overall: Great flash. Keep it up. I'll definately be looking out for your next flash.
Author's Response:
Humor: I'm assuming this wasn't meant to be funny.
^
lmfao
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Graphics: I was a little concerned in the beginning when there were only still images of the band member sillhouttes...but it got much better with time.
Style: Music videos are always cool. Nice job.
Sound: Trivium is a good band. Not one of my favorites, but they're still good.
Violence: There were some building falling down and such, but nothing too significant.
Interactivity + Humor: n/a
Overall: It was ok. Keep working, and I'm sure you'll come up with something great.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review
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I like this. I love the show and instead of doing long sound clips (with the exception of the Santa Song...but that was fucking awesome anyways) you had short clips of speech. Very well done.
Author's Response:
You're a cunt. 8 out of 10 is not satisfactory.
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Good Things:
1.) You covered a problem I don't think has been covered in a tutorial before.
2.) Great art.
3.) Good music.
Bad Things:
1.) You ended it too suddenly. You should've gone into a little more detail into changing the color of the loading bar and its border like you did with the text. Only a minor problem though. Nice job.
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