JesusSaves's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Call Of Sticks]

Not bad

Good things:
1.) It was pretty funny. Anyone who's ever played a shooter game can relate to this.

Bad things:
1.) Speech makes movies alot more exciting. Without it, your submission is likely to get either a low score, or just blammed.
2.) Using stick figures is a bad thing. It gets even worse when they're poorly animated. Work on your artwork a bit.

Flash-Twister responds:

i'll take that in mind

[Scrapland Episode 1]

Not bad

Good things:
1.) Nice drawing. Very neat and appealing.
2.) Different from other submissions I've seen recently. It's fun watching something that isn't usually done.
3.) Good sound. Speech was awesome, and that intro music was fitting.

Bad things:
1.) Move your characters around a little bit more. Change the scenery once a while (i.e. have your guy walk into the kitchen).

cbutters responds:

Thanks for your great review, its given me some additional ideas, I just need to get better at flash to pull of making things move better. but I agree 100% thats what i will try in episode 2

[The Adventures of Ben]

It had promise

Graphics: I like the way you drew things, but the animation was HORRIBLE. It was slow, and choppy in some points. Get it running smoothly and it will be much better.

Style: Kinda lame...kudos on the uniqueness tho. Russian dairysmith...lol.

Sound: UHG! If there was one thing I could contribute to your low score, it would be this. The voices were HORRIBLE!!! Back away from the mic and speak a little louder to fix them up.

Violence: A Russian is almost killed with a knife, and some guy gets cheese dropped on him. Not that great in my book.

Interactivity: n/a

Humor: I think it was more stupid than funny. Sure, it had it's good parts...but it was still mostly stupid.

Overall: It has promise, but you have some major things you need to work on (sound, graphics) before you get it right.

[Madness- Chaos]

Not another...

Graphics: Not that good. By the looks of it, they are drawn freehand...which results in very sloppy artwork.

Style: NO...MORE....MADNESS...TRIBUTES! We really have enough of these. Hell, my music even got used in one. Some advice, don't do Madness Tributes. They're almost as annoying as crappy stick movies.

Sound: Some music playing all the way through the movie in the background would have held my attention. It got boring after a while.

Violence: Hey, it's Madness! Violence galor! Improve your artwork and this would be ALOT better.

Interactivity + Humor: n/a

Overall: PLEASE stay away from Madness Tributes. They are a bad idea.

[Experiment_11]

Odd, but Good

Graphics: Awesome. I couldn't draw like that if I tried. XD

Style: This was so unique it's breaking the "Wtf?" barrier. It's still good though...I love it.

Sound: Great music. Somehow it fit the odd mood of the movie, which is great.

Violence: Creatures turned into some sort of food, and a ship getting eaten by a giant...thing. Not exactly great in my opinion, but seeing as violence wasn't the main idea of the movie it doesn't matter much.

Interactivity: n/a

Humor: I'm assuming this wasn't meant to be funny.

Overall: Great flash. Keep it up. I'll definately be looking out for your next flash.

ZekeySpaceyLizard responds:

Humor: I'm assuming this wasn't meant to be funny.
^
lmfao

[Trivium - Pull harder...]

It was ok...

Graphics: I was a little concerned in the beginning when there were only still images of the band member sillhouttes...but it got much better with time.

Style: Music videos are always cool. Nice job.

Sound: Trivium is a good band. Not one of my favorites, but they're still good.

Violence: There were some building falling down and such, but nothing too significant.

Interactivity + Humor: n/a

Overall: It was ok. Keep working, and I'm sure you'll come up with something great.

Trinidex responds:

Thanks for your review

[PLOLE]

4/5

Good Things:

1.) Great animation. How you could animate stick figures that small is beyond me.

2.) Great concept. Poles attacking stick figures...lol.

3.) I love that music.

Bad Things:

1.) The "HOLY SHIT" thing at the end was annoying.

2.) Too short.

[Plole2]

5/5

Good Things:

1.) LOL. It was funny as hell. Unique concept...you used stick figures but the pole thing was completely different. Im definitly checking out the first one.

2.) Nicely drawn. Once again, I would have usually marked you down for using stick figures but the animation was nice.

3.) The part where the guy goes "Hello" before he gets poled was hillarious.

Bad Things:

1.) Too short.

2.) I didn't like how you used speech in parts of it, and text in other parts. I'd rather you use speech the entire time...then it would be awesome.

[NES Shorts #1]

mmm...

not a big fan of sprite movies but im gonna put that aside and judge it fairly. everything was good expect one thing: i thought it was kinda stupid. mario kills bowser and then...baseball? i geuss i just dont get it.